The voice has good pitch and timbre to it, the music is reasonable. The verse starts well, but then becomes too crowded and clutered with disparate ideas. You should re-record the vocals with a simple linear melodic theme, tjat is legible and can be understood. Dont fly in with 50 different ideas that only confuse the listener. The big main deal is, your voice does not suck :0 so a rewrite is in order, if it wasn't I just wouldnt say anything! Good Luck!
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The voice has good pitch and timbre to it, the music is reasonable. The verse starts well, but then becomes too crowded and clutered with disparate ideas. You should re-record the vocals with a simple linear melodic theme, tjat is legible and can be understood. Dont fly in with 50 different ideas that only confuse the listener. The big main deal is, your voice does not suck :0 so a rewrite is in order, if it wasn't I just wouldnt say anything! Good Luck!
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